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Submitted: January 16
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_{First drawing of 2013! And it couldn't be anything than my OCs Ria and Kyed together!
I actually started this a month ago but I've been too busy (and lazy...) to finish this... xD
Entirely drawn by pencils. I used a googled image as visual reference.

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Critique by ~Felixuta Jan 18, 2013, 5:28:57 AM

First of all, wow.

I really love how the clouds look so fluffy and creamy. And their face expression is simply perfect. It oblivious that they're so in love

Okay back to critique. As I said, the expressions look amazing and they put a huge accent on their feelings that are in such a sweet harmony with the background. Speaking of background, I really how the clouds fade away gently in the page's extremities. Ria's left arm seen a bit too thin. But you've really done a great job with Kyed's arms.
The shading is impeccable. Especially in clouds' case.
The idea is brilliant and quite original,though it quite reminds me of the myth of Aphrodite's birth from the sea's foam.
Anyway,very good job and keep on uploading those amazing drawings of yours because they're truly amazing

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Critique by ~CicciaPalla Jan 17, 2013, 2:40:16 AM

Mi piace molto la parte dove le nuvole si intrecciano con la gamba e i fianchi della ragazza. Le uniche parti che non mi convincono molto sono quelle dei capelli, della gamba della ragazza e della spalla del ragazzo. Per quanto riguarda il resto c'è un'ottima resa del chiaroscuro. L'ombra del braccio di lui sul ventre di lei è una parte che in pochi riuscirebbero a rendere così bene. Mi piace anche il tuo modo di collocare la firma che riesce ad essere fusa con il disegno in un modo abbastanza naturale. In sintesi è comunque un bel lavoro. Sarei curiosa di vederlo dal vivo per notare meglio i dettagli. Se vuoi un consiglio per i lavori futuri io eviterei di calcare molto la linea di contorno nelle zone di luce in modo da dare più morbidezza al tutto.